OK OK this is not mine but from another site,, just want to know what you think about it?

And then there was this time when I was 18 that I was at the A&P shopping late one nite. There was a 16 yo I've seen their before, He offered to help me carry my bags home for a few dollars, talking to him on the way to my house I ask him why he was out so late. Bobby told that he need money since his dad wouldn't give him any and could not find any work. Telling me that his mom ran off 6 month