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trolleycar Member Since November 01, 2010
Helping younger brother part 2
trolleycar 4698 days ago
- 0 + Yes keep it coming

I agree with goofy about with the amount of Sound coming from them. I believe it would bring Mom and or Dad to find out what is going on the the two kids. But that could be used as a plus in the story. You could us that as the thrill

of trying not to be found out and at the same time to be as brazen as possible and not get court and at the same time really trying to be court. Or the be court and have Mom and or Dad want to watch the kids go at it and then the parents want to join in the fun and make it a family affair . I have no problems with the story. I can't wait for the next

chapter.