strokethemoonlight
Member Since October 19, 2009
Punished By The Police
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lukepreston
4976 days ago
strokethemoonlight
5449 days ago
lukepreston
4976 days ago
strokethemoonlight
5449 days ago
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10
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You are one hell of a writer. I was leaking so bad I had to put a towel under it. Keep em coming. I am definitely a fan. Pat
Spin The Bottle
by
paul1254
paul1254
What had me turned on was the fact that both the guy and girl were getting off with the dog. Keep writing more.
A massage to remember
by
redsox19181967
redsox19181967
Man this was very hot, and very well written. I liked the fact that it ended with an intense hand job, as to have gone further with a guy the first time, wouldn't have sounded realistic. You gave the story just the right amount of tension and sensuality
Rear Tire Poke
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freeassplay
freeassplay
This is a hot story. I like it , but you need to flesh it out more, be more decriptive in the final sex scene,the feelings and emtions,noises, and you need to work on your grammar. But a hot story ,nonetheless.
Sleepless Night
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hornyboy159
hornyboy159
This story is wonderfully written and hot. It is very believable and innocent,and I am glad that he didn't fuck her, it makes for a much more restrained sexual release for both and for the reader. Excellent job,keep writin.
Teachers Pet
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Petwriter
Petwriter
Very hot,very well written story. I love the way you built the tension and slowly increased the young man's curiousity and lust for his teacher. I would totally believe this could happen. You have a talent, don't waste it. Keep writing. A lot.
Daddy's Birthday
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ClintonB
ClintonB
I thought your story was great and hot. I love the way he came in her, and then she got woken up by her mom. That was good thinking on your part. At first you thought , yeah, he did it, then you thought, oh man, I wish he'd done it.
But it made you ho
But it made you ho
War is Hell
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tinkertoy
tinkertoy
Man I was spurting before the story even finished. YOu are one good writer. I couldn't find anything wrong with it, I loved the homoerotcism, without the actual gay sex,and both of them laying on top of him after ,him being so turned on feeling the majo
The Interview(An Introduction To Dallas)
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Center101
Center101
Wow! This story was a major turn-on. It was quick and raw, like a young stud would have it. It fit his personality and lust to behave so boldly and be able to take control over her. A good read. Keep it up, I know it will keep me up.
Family Gangbang
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bobstanton265
bobstanton265
This story is awesome. I was rock hard all through it. I want to hear more of what's to come. You've got me hotter than a firecracker.
The Fountain of Youh
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EFrost
EFrost
A very hot story. It moved a little too fast , you needed to flesh it out a bit more, add more detail and build up. But a good boner maker.lol
My Sister's Horny Boyfriend
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thearchivist
thearchivist
A very hot story. Had me boned up from beginning to end. Keep writing, you're good.
My Father's Son - Not mine, but I thought it was hot!
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Bryan562
Bryan562
This story is amazing, I haven't been this hard since high school. The writing is good too, but the content and eroticism is neverending.
A hitchhikers dream
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enigma_314
enigma_314
Not only was this story very well written, it was extremely erotic. I want more. I think I will get a flat tire real soon.lol
My Confession
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schooner
schooner
I liked this story. I had never had fantasies like this, but I truly enjoyed it. But, I have always liked sex with older men, and had my first experience with a man in his 40s when I was 13. It wasn't forced by any means. Nevertheless, I was able to put m
My wife and the yard boy
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sugaray
sugaray
The dialogue sounds too forced and unnatural. You need to get in touch with your characters and see and feel from inside them. Like how would kids that young really react to being able to get some pussy. At that age they wouldn't have already had any a
Decorating with Uncle
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Leo P
Leo P
Love the story and the images, but you should work on lengthening the erotic element of each sex act, such as slowly getting turned on by your uncles advances and finally submitting. Don't give away the gold so fast,let the excitement build gradually and
Full Physical
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canitbe
canitbe
I was close to giving you a 4 but unfortunately your last comment ruined it for me. True story folks. I find it highly unlikely that any straight, married man, would just start eating pussy as soon as the doctor told him to, or that he'd even stay in th
confused part 4
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seawoff
seawoff
Don't stop now, I'm really getting worked up. Man, the way you build the sexual tension, is terrific. You know how to tease the senses and make the reader want more, the sign of a good writer. Keep adding more installments. I'm a true fan of Confused
Photo Surprise
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ParentsNotHome
ParentsNotHome
Wow! This was surprisingly hot! I found it read like a well written novel segment, which had derived from a previous scene. The tension built at just the right speed, and the sexual reactions and movements seemed real, believable and not contrived in th
I'm still straight honest.
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g8tohavesex
g8tohavesex
Fucking hot! Man , you are one hell of a writer. I am going to blow my load in a bit, thanks to you. Please write more stories like this one. My dick and I both thank you.
The Conjugal Visit
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durfbag
durfbag
At first I thought , is this going to work enough for me. Then, after your description of how devil may care the son was, I thought, he's going to use her pussy like a knothole in a tree, no compassion, just focusing on his needs , degrading her. I agai
Charles
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parkstranger57
parkstranger57
This story is awesome! I was so turned on, as I like the younger/older man scenario. I have had several experiences along this line, and it never ceases to amaze me how sexually compatible a younger man is with an older one. Yet most younger men only w
A Father's Need
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sik fuk
sik fuk
I was hooked on every hot description of what he was doing and she and him were feeling. I kind of wanted him to at least push the head of his dick against her hole while he was cumming so the cum would enter her and then his fingers push it inside of he
Grandpa's Lessons Part 3
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MissSexKitten27
MissSexKitten27
I am really enjoying every episode of this story. I was hard from the get-go and after reading all three, am leaking like crazy and can't wait for episode 4. Your style moves quickly wihout losing the excitement or the aura of lust and raw sexuality of
High school Fuck
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Suckmydiick
Suckmydiick
Wow! You write great porn. This is a hot one. I can't wait to read part 2. I have a feeling that you've got an excellent surprise in store for us. Excellent.