User safarijim | Commented | Sex Stories Post

safarijim Member Since October 19, 2009

nans foot fetish 2 by

tomqaz1 4977 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 3 + I like your story and where your taking it. You should really look into making your chapters longer.

Pea Pod Pt3 by

Wholeman 4977 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 5 + Fantastic story my friends loved it. I hope you will write more chapters, if you need some ideas for the next chapter e-mail me at blaquetears@gmail.com

Cumming to A Realization...(Part 3) by

PinkBunny 4977 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 5 + you took the story in an excellent direction, could have been longer though. i wondered what the mom thought about all this. Cant wait for the next chapter

part two by

Shard 4977 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 1 + part two of what? and you need more than 1 page stories. More plot, more detail would be nice

Cumming to A Realization...(Part 2) by

PinkBunny 4977 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 4 + nice lead in at the end makes me wanna read the chapters to come. Try making your chapters a little longer tough

1 by

jttobias 4999 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 5 + Cant wait for chapter two

My Name is Jacob chp.1 Discovering my Powers by

Sextopics 5000 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 4 + Should probably work on the length of your chapters maybe develope some other main characters maybe the girl from bk bas powers who knows. Be sure to throw some twists in there throughout the series.

Family Traditions Prt 1 by

azrael07 5075 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 0 + cool intro to what could be an excellent story. cant wait for chapter 2. try and make the chapters a little longer though

The Thrill Of Taboo (part 5) by

britneyh80@yahoo.com 5173 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 5 + This story is great i would really like to see more chapters of it. I like that your chapters are long. I check the site daily so ill be waiting =)

Friends, Siblings, and Cousins pt 1 by

thunder65mike 5201 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 4 + Excellent job. Keep up the good work.

Confessions in the family room by

mutterguffin1 5304 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 4 + Good story cant wait for the next sexscapade. but yea if you just seperate the paragraphs it will be much less intimidating to read and youll prolly get more feedback as well.

Tasha and I at the Gloryhole Party 2 by

mrking 5317 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 5 + Great story, i like the direction your story is going and i cant wait for the next chapter.

Mother-Daughter catfight to the death and Necrobabes by

PunkMaister 5354 days ago

safarijim 5449 days ago

- 4 + Thats some dark story, good read tho just wish it was a little longer