pusshunter
Member Since October 19, 2009
College kid has his way with a 14 year old girl
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Collegekid
4977 days ago
pusshunter
5449 days ago
Collegekid
4977 days ago
pusshunter
5449 days ago
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First off I am all about constructive criticism so I will give examples of your shitty grammar (though it won't all fit) "my six foot body football body frame with a tan reflection and blue eyes seemed to attracted all the girls i ever endured." "I have a
The day I found out I was double jointed
by
davidj
davidj
I would gladly tell you that this is the worste, most dispicable, worthless waste of time ever presented on this website; however, unbelievably i have read worse. Now that you have started with a story equivilant to a 3rd grade report try writing a story
Sex at camp with my friend
by
ian123
ian123
Honestly, You Had A Good Storyline And Would Have Had A Great Story; However, Poor Sentence Structure, Run-ons, And Grammar Downgraded Your Story Majorly. Good Start Though.