perv4lilgrrls
Member Since December 12, 2009
Me and My Sweet Blonde Neigbour
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anonymous
4150 days ago
perv4lilgrrls
4149 days ago
anonymous
4150 days ago
perv4lilgrrls
4149 days ago
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a nice set up but without the next chapter it sucks
Peeping Tom 2: The Next Day
by
pervnxtdoor
pervnxtdoor
i am hoping you will continue with the seires. many a memory is brought back to mind.
Daddy Took Me Up (formerly Samantha's Daddy)
by
fenderbender
fenderbender
you did an excellent job adding the extra part. keep it cumming.
the neighbors daughter
by
sexer1
sexer1
> the overall storyline is good, slightly quick in the progression, details lacking a bit and grammar/spelling not the best.
> really good story to embellish more. i really love where he really quit caring her age and just wants to fuck her every and any way. this is where you can get detailed more and erotic.
> hope to see a second part and where we go from this point. many avenues to pursue. keep it up.
have a wonderful day
> really good story to embellish more. i really love where he really quit caring her age and just wants to fuck her every and any way. this is where you can get detailed more and erotic.
> hope to see a second part and where we go from this point. many avenues to pursue. keep it up.
have a wonderful day
Mom sucks her son's cock daily...
by
MammaR
MammaR
bravo ... bravo quite an exceptional story, very well written. i truly hope there is more to the story. thanks again and keep up the great work. lilgrrlperv@yahoo.com
Helping younger brother Part 1
by
anonymous
anonymous
a little quick with not much substance, but still good overall.
Forbidden Lust Part 2
by
cassilac
cassilac
the story is coming along great, maybe just a bit more detail. more build-up to all that happens, how your pussy starts to drip, nipples get tall and hard, etc. i'm waiting for #3
Forbidden Lust Part 1
by
cassilac
cassilac
it seems a little rushed in the setup, maybe a few more details. build their tension a bit more. overall it seems as though it will be a great story. please continue and we shall see.
It shouldn't have happened but it did
by
klm0559
klm0559
overall you have a nice theme. it seems just a bit pushed, rushed. take your time and give a bit more detail to build up some parts. maybe a little more suspense at points. the fear of fucking your daughter in law and perils if son found out. etc. etc. this will make it more of a story. but also remember that some people just want dirty sex and a straight fuck and run. when you find your audience they will let you know. first try was a good try. keep up the work and i wish you only the best.
Daddy's Special Little Girl Part 2- Daddy is my Prince
by
XXXAnnabellaXXX
XXXAnnabellaXXX
progressing quite nicely, please continue. can't wait for more.
Me My Mum And A fucking wild Year
by
parabe2
parabe2
hopefully part two is as hot as mom. seems like she wants alot of sonny-boy. get yourself a sister with her and some real fun.
Getting Fucked by Uncle… Part 2
by
dreamgirl
dreamgirl
just keep them and him cummin, practice makes perfection
My Sister Becky
by
robbiemd1993
robbiemd1993
good beginning, becky is first ?, then mom ?, then both ?, just check some of the spelling, keep it going
TRUE STORY: “AT 13, MY DOG TOOK MY VIRGINITYâ€Â
by
BuccaBabe@Yahoo.com
BuccaBabe@Yahoo.com
do you order hamburgers without meat or buns too ?
Daddy's Little Girl - Part 3 (Daddy's Fuck Doll)
by
kinky_katty
kinky_katty
may i cum with uncle jack ? good stuff