User naughty_girl69 | Commented

Haunted Mirror 3 by

K.Teal 4977 days ago

naughty_girl69 5449 days ago

- 10 + It's a good story and well written. Very dark, though. Very dark. Hope to see a new one soon.

Boy realy meets mom by

370244 4977 days ago

naughty_girl69 5449 days ago

- 4 + It has potential. First thing you should do is check your grammar and spelling. Some the tenses you use don't make much sense when you're reading it. There were quite a few spelling errors as well (use microsoft word, it has spellchecker on it). And last,

Assassin's Plight by

InnocenceAngel 4977 days ago

naughty_girl69 5449 days ago

- 0 + While this story is certainly well written I do not believe a sexstories site was the best place to submit it for commentary. This would be better suited on a board for budding writters. Good job though.

Memoirs of a Vampyr's Daughter by

Nemus_of_Scienta187 4977 days ago

naughty_girl69 5449 days ago

- 8 + I'm intrigued. Add more. Great start.

Brother & Sister: Part 1 by

world_refugee 4977 days ago

naughty_girl69 5449 days ago

- 10 + I loved it and can't wait to read more!

Caught in the Rain Part 1 by

OtterMan 4977 days ago

naughty_girl69 5449 days ago

- 10 + I loved this story. It was a perfect balance of romance, love, and of course sex. Please write a part 2 and soon!

Are You Afraid of the Dick? by

Blackroses 5209 days ago

naughty_girl69 5449 days ago

- 10 + Someone used to watch Nickelodeon. THat show with the "scary" stories told around a campfire that always ended with the bucket of water thrown on the fire. Anyway, it was an original story and I love how you twisted the kiddy show. I'd like a second part

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