misstrouble
Member Since October 19, 2009
My Sis Obsession
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liam1090
4977 days ago
misstrouble
5449 days ago
liam1090
4977 days ago
misstrouble
5449 days ago
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I think this story is written by a 11 year old, its boring, doesnt make sense, no storyline, hardly any conversations. Why bother writing a story? there's no talent, i hope not to see more coming from you again
To Many.... Way To Little
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coast2coastvp
coast2coastvp
Why bother with coding? Why bother with big letters? Its rubbish, practise writing a story first
Sissy's Little Secret
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shyshannon
shyshannon
Very good story, also a very good imagination. Build up the tension when coming to sex to keep the readers gripped =D. but overall 5 stars!!!
Mother and Son
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asiansexkitten
asiansexkitten
still getting the hang of the star ratings lol. I give you 4/5, because its a good story with imagination
Breeding Slave
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Masters_lilcocksucker
Masters_lilcocksucker
This is the fucking crappiest story ive ever read, no stars for u, stupid person. go back to college and learn how to write a full story
watching me cum
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lastcallg
lastcallg
I think it would be better to write your story in Microsoft word so you have spellcheck and alhough you may had planned to write a short story, add in details before you get to the point, I've given you a one and i personally think you can do much better.
Only mom and I Know ch.1
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thestoryspinner
thestoryspinner
i thought the story was very well written, but where is the incest? if u plan to enter a story in the incest catergory,put some incest in
Sex at camp with my friend
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ian123
ian123
i thought the story was good but i think you went too far by giving the lad a 14 inch cock!! But then again its your story :) i rated u a three
Hot Sis Returns to Shy Bro
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WetBikini
WetBikini
I thought that the story was very well written with spellings and paragraphs. I loved the story line and how you built up the tension to sex
Equus Desire Part 3
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FreakieJeni
FreakieJeni
i'm a horse lover and go horse riding often and i think this story is brilliant, really explore the imagination of a human being sexually exploring an animal. truly good
The Dirtier, The Better
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DamonX_200879
DamonX_200879
now i dont usually read long stories but i was gripped by your story and i think how you detailed every bit of the story and how you built up to the point was amazing, i hope you do a second story with Damon and Erica!!
Mandy and the kids
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redrabbit
redrabbit
i thought the story was very well written, i dont usually read long stories but the storyline was so good that i just gotta read it all the way through/ full marks!!