 
					
							jayloves69a
							Member Since October 19, 2009
						
													
											
	
	
	
		Me & Kelsey
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				no build up or climax bad story!!!
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Eleanor's descent chptr 03
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				very good keep it up
				
		
	
	
	
	
		When Kin have to move in with Kin
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Looks like alot of work went into it, story line isn't the best and you swear way to much in a story kinda puts you off reading IMO.
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Brother & Sister: Part 2
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				great story hoping for the next :)
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Brother & Sister: Part 2
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				lol they shud make the darker colour the real star ffs
				
		
	
	
	
	
		My Turn (Pt. 1)
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Great story hope to see the next installment, but yeah drew is right it needs more realism but great story non the less
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Fun in the family
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				more please awesome story
				
		
	
	
	
	
		My friends bro and his gf
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				its ok needs to be longer though
				
		
	
	
	
	
		I'm in control
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Great story a little bad spelling here and there but all in all great story can't wait for the nexy installment :)
				
		
	
	
	
	
		I'm in control
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
												
										
				Great story a little bad spelling here and there but all in all great story can't wait for the nexy installment :)
				
		
	
	
	
	
		Just 1 Crazy night ill remember
	
	
	
	
		
			
			
		
		
											
												
										
				My grammer is good and so is by spelling mate, and i am writing another chapter billyleeblack and that'll have ur erotica in it lol
				
		
	

"I am a 43 year-old constructor. Clever, handsome, rich" anyway good story hoping for more :p