User jayloves69a | Commented | Sex Stories Post

jayloves69a Member Since October 19, 2009

Father's Diary by

Journalist 4970 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 6 + Well i first noticed this mistake "I am so poor that I canâ€™t afford to buy her any beautiful clothing" its a mistake because you said earlier in it

"I am a 43 year-old constructor. Clever, handsome, rich" anyway good story hoping for more :p

Me & Kelsey by

parklen86 4970 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 0 + no build up or climax bad story!!!

Eleanor's descent chptr 03 by

owlsukfan2003 4970 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 8 + very good keep it up

When Kin have to move in with Kin by

UNDERTAKER01 4970 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 4 + Looks like alot of work went into it, story line isn't the best and you swear way to much in a story kinda puts you off reading IMO.

Brother & Sister: Part 2 by

world_refugee 4970 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 0 + great story hoping for the next :)

Brother & Sister: Part 2 by

world_refugee 4970 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 10 + lol they shud make the darker colour the real star ffs

My Turn (Pt. 1) by

storieteller 4970 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 10 + Great story hope to see the next installment, but yeah drew is right it needs more realism but great story non the less

Fun in the family by

incestlover1987 4970 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 10 + more please awesome story

My friends bro and his gf by

lastcallg 4970 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 10 + its ok needs to be longer though

I'm in control by

Supdup#1 5069 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 0 + Great story a little bad spelling here and there but all in all great story can't wait for the nexy installment :)

I'm in control by

Supdup#1 5069 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 10 + Great story a little bad spelling here and there but all in all great story can't wait for the nexy installment :)

Just 1 Crazy night ill remember by

jayloves69a 5367 days ago

jayloves69a 5442 days ago

- 6 + My grammer is good and so is by spelling mate, and i am writing another chapter billyleeblack and that'll have ur erotica in it lol