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gumie35 Member Since October 19, 2009
Naughty 13 year old Kelly (Part 3)
gumie35 5449 days ago
- 3 + Nice story. Not many people can write that well. Keep them coming.
My mom loves me
gumie35 5449 days ago
- 3 + Your first time is not bad, but you need an editor. You need to have someone read your work first and then post it. Keep writing and work on more back story for build up. Make the sex scenes a little longer. More description should do the trick. Good luck
Mother and son help each other out pt. 2
gumie35 4535 days ago
- 0 + part one is on lush
Mother's new dress
gumie35 5449 days ago
- 4 + great story
Mom Takes Son to Dr. Linda
gumie35 5449 days ago
- 1 + I have read this story before on a different site by a professional. Where did you copy it?
Partying Cheerleader Style pt 2
gumie35 5449 days ago
- 5 + I am not sure about the type, it is a default type. It is just like the rest on my computer.
Poker with my firends and my daughter
gumie35 5449 days ago
- 5 + It was a great story, the back story was the greatest. Too few writers know how to make you feel the story. The build up was great. Keep writing them.