francis
Member Since October 19, 2009
The Sleepover in the Closet.
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geeps
5019 days ago
francis
5491 days ago
geeps
5019 days ago
francis
5491 days ago
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But please, please check the spelling!!! Use a spell checker or a dictionary - it made is hard reading as I was distracted by the appalling errors.
slave_ofthe_jackal
by
Hannah
Hannah
A potentially good story ruined by terrible spelling. Also please learn what a parragraph is too. Proper use of upper and lower case letters would be nice too.
Daughter Daughter Mom and Me part 5
by
OMO
OMO
Can you use a larger font size and breakit up more with spacing and parragraphs - as it it so difficult to read in this present format