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dreamin_of_a_girl Member Since October 19, 2009
Saturday Night Slut by beck 4976 days ago
dreamin_of_a_girl 5448 days ago
- 6 + Not a bad story, perhaps a lil short though. I think that you could easily have got away with doubling the length of the story.

Your description was good though not complete, you mention nothing of what Shaun looks like... Admittedly your character wou
Thanksgiving at Rob's by hillarysmuff 4976 days ago
dreamin_of_a_girl 5448 days ago
- 10 + I have read many of your other pieces and like your style and imagination.

I would like to offer some assistance in your writing. I have been an author and playwright for a long time now and have a lot of experience with writing which I am happy to sha
She Was Perfect by mibrainisdead 4977 days ago
dreamin_of_a_girl 5448 days ago
- 0 + I have been a member of this site for a long time and though I have found one or two good writers here I have to say that few compare to you. The detail was excuicite, the vocabulary was wonderful and the dialouge was amazing. Full five stars from me.