mamlvr
Member Since October 19, 2009
My Cheeleader Girlfriend's Porn Show
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Fuckinbiatch01
5341 days ago
mamlvr
5341 days ago
Fuckinbiatch01
5341 days ago
mamlvr
5341 days ago
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Horrible to read. After I saw that there were no breaks, I didn't even try. Break up the story visually - like paragraphs.
My Cheeleader Girlfriend's Porn Show
by
Fuckinbiatch01
Fuckinbiatch01
Paragraphs!!! When are you writers going to realize that it is difficult to read if you don't break the story up with some spaces?