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comsmith22 Member Since October 19, 2009
The babysitter and my mother
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 5 + this a great story... Its Most intriguing and very arousing, its hot simple and to the point I am looking forward to the further adventures of the horny folks
The babysitter and my mother
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 3 + The story line is great…

Most intriguing and very arousing, its hot simple and to the point I am looking forward to the further adventures of this horny family
Leah's Wild Sexual Adventures - Chapter 5
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 5 + looking forward to the next chapters...
Discoveries Of A Young Boy
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 0 + the list is missing parts 7-8-9 ...

are thy posted in another location?
Mother sucks me
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 4 + great start i am looking for the next installments ... looking forward to seeing who comes next...
A Little Bit of Force
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 5 + Great start of a series, short, sweet, hot and wet... I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes from here...

Thanks

Geo
A Little Bit of Force
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 5 + fantastic start keep the series "cumming"
A Little Bit of Force
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 4 + great start for a series...
A Little Bit of Force
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 4 + great story Hot wet and deep...
FINALLY!!! I HAN MY COUSIN FOR BREAKFAST
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 2 + good start ... just need to use the Spell and collect thoughts and then express check in a story format... your not "IM'ing" you best friend your score from last night... you actually have the the start for a series when you have it formatted properly MS
Camryn: C09
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 4 + Its a great start, break it down into paragraphs and write chapter 2
My 14th Birthday Part2
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 1 + Not a bad follow, up a bit on the short side. I am interested in seeing what cums next...

ya need to use spell check... a little grammar, punctuation and proof reading... is also in line.
walking in on my sister
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 3 + Hot story... I hope you have more installments to cum
A New Home For Sandy
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 3 + Great beginnings looking forward to more...
Sleeping Cousin
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 2 + Ya just need to get more into it ... its not a last minute essay for English class
my erotic lesson
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 4 + A bit long in getting to the point but its hot wet and to the point... I'm looking forward to more adventures of this bunch of lusty Teens
my erotic lesson
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 4 + Most intriguing and very arousing, its hot simple and to the point I am looking forward to the further adventures of the horny teens and their dogs…
my erotic lesson
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 5 + this was hot and knocked the socks off... I hope your going to continue the story...
my erotic lesson
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 4 + Most intriguing and very arousing, its hot, simple, and to the point. I am looking forward to the further adventures of this horny teen and her pets…
my erotic lesson
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 5 + Most intriguing and very arousing, its hot simple and to the point I am looking forward to the further adventures of the horny teens and their pets…
Caught by my twin, then taught her how.
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 3 + Great beginnings... I'm looking forward to more installments...
Girlfriend's play while husband's "away"
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 5 + Its a fantastic start ... I am waiting for the rest of the story and the following chapters... I am looking forward to seeing the fun between the girls and Rex!!!
Joyce and I Do The Lab
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 5 + I am hooked on Teresa's exploits ... I am waiting to see what cums next for Teresa
IT SHOCKED ME
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 4 + Great beginnings... I'm looking forward to more installments...
I seduced my brother's friends
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 5 + I am falling in love ... or lust with little Nikki... your stories are so well done and and so Hot... Thank you Bev...
Horny Aunt,Cousin,& Sister at Thanksgiving PT.3
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 4 + Great beginning for a new series... I'm looking forward to reading more of their exploits
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comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 3 + A few things...

1… Use proper punctuation, capitalization and spell check.

2… You are writing a story, not texting your “BFF”, stop with the text type speech…

Now the story is good and well laid out… and your intro to the next chapter
CAUGHT BY MY WIFE
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 5 + hot story ... thanks ... i am looking forward to reading what happens next ... are more engagements planned ... possibly with friends???
my first time with blackie
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 5 + hot story ... thanks ... i am looking forward to reading what happens next with his pet dog
My Trick with My Dick
comsmith22 5448 days ago
- 3 + love the brother sister thing...

A few things...

1… Use proper punctuation, capitalization and spell check.

2… You are writing a story, not texting your “BFF”, stop with the text type speech…