brina
Member Since October 19, 2009
First Night--part 1
by
Thorny Rose
4977 days ago
brina
5449 days ago
Thorny Rose
4977 days ago
brina
5449 days ago
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I wanna see more!
Mary's Bad Day
by
nikki_cherry
nikki_cherry
Hi Nikki_Cherry! well, it seems your writing-cherry was popped:))) and i must say the story is terrific for a virgin writer like yourself!
i loved the exposion and humiliation and abuse. the woman was slightly bothering me and there was not as much act
i loved the exposion and humiliation and abuse. the woman was slightly bothering me and there was not as much act
If you go down to the woods today, beware of a big surprise...
by
fuckinghorny
fuckinghorny
the story wasn't bad. though extremely short. it needs more details, description, character development. the girl should have struggled. she would feel scared, deeply ashamed and embarassed at the torture and domination and the extreme exposure. Add dirty
Hand in the Darkness
by
jezlady
jezlady
that's one hell of a cliffhanger! i wanna see part 2. make it really long and detailed please. humiliate and embarass the girl. make her scared and ashamed.
I can't wait!!!
I can't wait!!!
Charlenes Destiny
by
shadealtares
shadealtares
although i was a bit disappointed. i was expecting more of the initiation. cutting her arm was absolutely unnecessary and the guy didn't do anything to her. he just walked away and left a couple of guys with her. the initiation should have been humiliatin