bohdia
Member Since October 19, 2009
The Debate Team Part Five
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Dafunks
4979 days ago
bohdia
5451 days ago
Dafunks
4979 days ago
bohdia
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what happened? Repost!!!
The New Freshman
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sexytime
sexytime
A bit more dialogue would have made it better. You never explained the freshmen was the girl on facebook
The Debate Team Part 2
by
Dafunks
Dafunks
Good balance of time spent developing the story, storyline and action. Keep going
The Daughter Dilemma (Chapter 2)
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LisaBee
LisaBee
Make them have to seduce the fathers a bit, then maybe they all come together ofr a final e