User Xcartica | Commented | Sex Stories Post

hrnytoad 4977 days ago

Xcartica 5449 days ago

- 1 + DUDE WTF! cmon, dont do that shit... its wrong and retarded... I take the time to look at it... and you go outside for air and thats it. LEARN TO WRITE!

Sex With a Star's Daughter by

Maximo 4977 days ago

Xcartica 5449 days ago

- 8 + Could most definately use more paragraph seperation, and no problem with building the story up but you really rushed the sex scene. But yeah, would love to read part 2

Me and my cousin by

Kazz 4977 days ago

Xcartica 5449 days ago

- 1 + 1, you do not know how to spell. 2, its so fucking unbelievable you cant even get into it. and 3, You have NO talent for writing. For ANY unlucky lady you ever do fuck. I hope you dont fuck like you type. Cause theres no way you will ever have her

me n my cousin by

jayfrommbro 4977 days ago

Xcartica 5449 days ago

- 1 + dude... dont even attempt another part. barely a fucking paragraph.

Friends Little Sister by

sum1_not_cool 5172 days ago

Xcartica 5449 days ago

- 10 + dude please, please, please... do everyone on this site a favor... do not ever, even attempt writing another story. you have no imagination. not limited.... NO IMAGINATION. No buildup... NOTHING!!! I cant believe I wasted 2 mins reading this piece of s

Friends Little Sister by

sum1_not_cool 5172 days ago

Xcartica 5449 days ago

- 0 + dude please, please, please... do everyone on this site a favor... do not ever, even attempt writing another story. you have no imagination. not limited.... NO IMAGINATION. No buildup... NOTHING!!! I cant believe I wasted 2 mins reading this piece of s

Are You Afraid of the Dick? by

Blackroses 5210 days ago

Xcartica 5449 days ago

- 10 + Maybe In The Next Chapter, Erin Gets Drilled By Her Brother? :-P Anyways. Pretty Good Story.

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