That-Poet-Guy
Member Since October 19, 2009
Audrey
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LongDuckDong
5019 days ago
That-Poet-Guy
5491 days ago
LongDuckDong
5019 days ago
That-Poet-Guy
5491 days ago
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10
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You need to write more, we all want to know what else happened with you and her!
Me and my Mom pt.1
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cOKe_HorE_69
cOKe_HorE_69
You should do more but you also should've given more in this story, we dont know how this will play out so please be more detailed in the second part.
Older Sister and Younger Brother Shower
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That-Poet-Guy
That-Poet-Guy
I think that you were just trying to write it in a way that conformed with the other styles of writing on this site. You have some talent and i bet that if you wrote in your own way that you would be an amazing author.
Massaging My Aunt
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DroppedHI
DroppedHI
ok story. ruined by the horrible spelling and typos. The sex scene was terrible and way too short. you need to learn how to proof read.
My little cousn
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Joshie
Joshie
i think im stupider for having read that piece of shit. Come back when you learn how to fucking write!
Day at the pool
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fatblackanduglyasever
fatblackanduglyasever
Great story, i loved how you added a little comedy at the end with " 'Did you remember to record it this time?' 'Of course!' " I actually laughed at that part. Overal i give it a 10 outta 10, good job!
Hiking Vacation-part 1 - By Fantasayweaver
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Fantasyweaver
Fantasyweaver
Im very impressed, this is by far the best thing ive read on here. Correct spelling for the next one, other than that, dont change a thing!
Hot Little Neice
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Jim Moore
Jim Moore
It didn't give any back-story to how they started this relationship. Also, nieces don't call their uncles "uncle", maybe like "uncle jim" or something, but no one ever just says uncle.
Nick Tries A Dog. M/F
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[Atomic.Moose]
[Atomic.Moose]
You should really just kill yourself for writing something this horrible.
My Story - Mother and Son in The Hot Tub
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Jim Andy
Jim Andy
You should write more, even if it is true, your use of vivid imagery really gives the readerthe impression of being there!
Sarah's present for her Brother
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Carolina3777
Carolina3777
You should make a continuation/part 2 of it. Is this a true story? If it is then you're a good big sister, lol