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Powderhound522 Member Since October 19, 2009
Our second time by Dawn_1 5387 days ago
Powderhound522 5859 days ago
- 5 + This was a good story, it captured the action well. Use quotes, though -- it would make your story much better.
The party by spankme 5388 days ago
Powderhound522 5859 days ago
- 8 + Good story, but you should re-read before you post -- there was a big section that was repeated.