Orishes
Member Since April 22, 2011
The Castle... Part 1
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Nastyman
3666 days ago
Orishes
3662 days ago
Nastyman
3666 days ago
Orishes
3662 days ago
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I really liked this story and hope you continue it. The only issue I have with it is that there didn't seem to be to much detail in the sex scenes. It seemed like Jackie was remembering the events but only told us the general idea, not specifics.
Difficult Boy Pt. 2
by
jjonah
jjonah
I cannot STAND that narcissistic little bitch of a CHILD! His mother deserves a happy life whether it involves him or not (I admit that Brad-Chad wouldn't supply that happy life, but Gretchen was only using him for a one night stand anyway). I think that Gretchen should have bitten his dick off just to prove that he does NOT always get what he wants (not to mention you NEVER force yourself on a woman).
Loosing your virginity does not automatically make an adult; you have to act like one to be considered an adult. With the way things are now he'll never be an adult.
I realize that my little rant may seem juvenile and extreme at times, but that's just how much that boy pisses me off.
I do however, agree with Morgen about it being well written and free of grammar and spelling errors.
Loosing your virginity does not automatically make an adult; you have to act like one to be considered an adult. With the way things are now he'll never be an adult.
I realize that my little rant may seem juvenile and extreme at times, but that's just how much that boy pisses me off.
I do however, agree with Morgen about it being well written and free of grammar and spelling errors.
Summer is Here
by
anonymous
anonymous
I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. Personally, I think that Alexis, Denise and Luca should have a threesome and have both women bear his children (obviously keep the husband in the dark about it and if he finds out; have the women leave him for Luca).
I'll admit that I'm a little picky when it comes to grammar and hope that you don't have as many errors as you did in this chapter.
Hope to see more soon.
I'll admit that I'm a little picky when it comes to grammar and hope that you don't have as many errors as you did in this chapter.
Hope to see more soon.
Cherry Hill riding club part 3
by
Morgen
Morgen
I'm quickly realizing that you're one of the best authors on this site.
I can't wait for chapter 4, and I still think that Mom and daughter should co-star in a movie although not their first ones. They should probably each do a solo movie just to get used to the idea of getting fucked by a horse; then they can tackle the idea of being in a porn movie together.
I can't wait for chapter 4, and I still think that Mom and daughter should co-star in a movie although not their first ones. They should probably each do a solo movie just to get used to the idea of getting fucked by a horse; then they can tackle the idea of being in a porn movie together.
Cherry Hill riding club part 1
by
Morgen
Morgen
I loved this story and can't wait for the next one. I think it'd be hot if both Jen and Emily became part of the riding club (a wonderful mother daughter bonding experience ;)).
Auntie Babs farm part 4
by
Morgen
Morgen
I can't wait to read chapter 5, and I'm glad that at least the mom is getting involved (I honestly don't care if the dad does or not). Truthfully, since you haven't mentioned anything about protection, I think it'd be hot if the women got pregnant (although I'm not sure it'd be a good idea for a 15 year old to get pregnant, still be hot as hell though).
If you do decide to have some/all of them get pregnant then I hope you at least have Richard knock up Barbara or Abby. For some reason I don't like the idea of Abby having her dad's or the neighbor's child.
Best of luck on the next chapter.
If you do decide to have some/all of them get pregnant then I hope you at least have Richard knock up Barbara or Abby. For some reason I don't like the idea of Abby having her dad's or the neighbor's child.
Best of luck on the next chapter.
David Wicker Chronicles Part II
by
Big_dick_8632
Big_dick_8632
Like I said on the first story I'd love for David to have a harem of family members, classmates, teachers and maybe some of his mother's friends or co-workers, but I'd rather them be a willing harem not blackmailed into it. I also forgot to mention that I don't like the idea of David fucking guys.
David Wicker Chronicles Part I
by
Big_dick_8632
Big_dick_8632
I wouldn't mind reading more of this story. If you do continue I'd like to see David impregnate not only his sister but any other family he has as well as girls from school and even a few teachers (in case you can't tell I have a huge harem and impregnation fetish as well as incest). Honestly I don't like the idea of David fucking or getting fucked by animals but it's fine if the women want to fuck animals (kinda one sided I know, but that's how I feel).
can't wait to see what happens next.
can't wait to see what happens next.
Storm Child part 6
by
Morgen
Morgen
Awesome! I love that you included the wife this way. I still think that Jenna should get pregnant since she's had about 7 loads of cum shot into her womb and there's no mention of birth control or anything. Plus I think it would be awesome if she did get pregnant.