NightmarePrincess
Member Since October 19, 2009
She Was Perfect
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mibrainisdead
4950 days ago
NightmarePrincess
5422 days ago
mibrainisdead
4950 days ago
NightmarePrincess
5422 days ago
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I have read many stories on this site and several others and have found few to my liking. Not many authors take the time to really nurture a storyline and let it unfold. This is truly a beautifully crafted tale. I do hope you will post many more stories i
A Quiet Night In 2
by
paul1254
paul1254
The plot flowed well and the story was nicely written. I do have to comment though on the structure. You should seperate dialog from the rest of the paragraph to make it stand out more. Also try not to make such long paragraphs. It's too easy to get lost
Bus Trip
by
BlackSnake
BlackSnake
i love the approach with this story. It is unlike the normal mother/son story which makes it even more appealing. The only problem i had with it, was the appearance. i am not sure if it was sent in that way or just a problem in the file transfer phase of