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LoenBellmont Member Since October 10, 2010
A Clockwork Orange Girlfrriend chapter 1
LoenBellmont 5079 days ago
- 0 + Loved it right from the beginning. It appealed to the sadist in me and i cant wait to see were the story goes from here.
Dr. Lynn Room 690
LoenBellmont 5096 days ago
- 0 + Man do i wish I had a doctor like her. Great story!
Wizards of Waverly Place Inescapable Lust Chapter 3
LoenBellmont 5103 days ago
- 0 + I'm only writing this for a bit of fun, If I'm not true to the actual characters as they are portrayed on TV then fucking tough. The point and purpose of these stories is the sex if you want Wizards of Waverly Place with the characters as they should be then watch the show. Quit the abuse stephfly or i will devour your soul.
Wizards of Waverly Place Inescapable Lust Chapter 3
LoenBellmont 5101 days ago
- 0 + To lilshepherd and Rachelnicole1991 who have been with this from the beginning and also link3994 as always thank you for the continued support. I'm kind of struggling to finish part 4 but it is almost done and i will more than likely have it up tonight. I am making part 5 a Halloween special but i can't grantee it will be up for Halloween. To make absolutely clear constructive criticism i can take but if you completely disagree with what I'm doing then as lilshepherd said just don't read my work and please don't leave the same kind of comment as stephfly, i actually considered giving up writing the rest of this series because of it. I realize how that sounds but ah well. Thank you all again and when am I going to get to read some of your work?
Wizards of Waverly Place Inescapeable Lust Chapter 2
LoenBellmont 5102 days ago
- 0 + Thanks for the tip, I will keep it in mind if i ever rewrite and post it all as one big story. I should have also mentioned that Juliet is a day walker and therefor can't be incinerated by the sun. Only thought of that know oops.
Wizards of Waverly Place Inescapeable Lust
LoenBellmont 5105 days ago
- 0 + Thank you both so much for the comments, It's given me so much more confidence than i had when i posted It that my hands are trembling with excitement as i write this. Part 2 and now part 3 are up if you go to my page under submitted so check there.Part 4 will probably take 3 or 4 days. Just got a new job and i have to study for my driving theory test next month but i will try and get part 4 written and posted for next Monday. Once again i can't thank you both enough and I'm glad you enjoyed my work. Always remember to tip your waitresses thank you and good bye.