LadyKelien
Member Since October 19, 2009
A Fathers Downfall Chapter 2
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malice_intentional@yahoo.com.au
malice_intentional@yahoo.com.au
Megan keep going your doing wonderfully well. I love your work. To bad your feed back has to be tainted by being read by a pedifile who doesn't understand the difference between fantasy and reality.
The New Girl in the Bar
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BaseballMonkey32
BaseballMonkey32
Cheesecake yoe've been reading to much penthouse forum. You can't even call that a short story its more like a fish tale you tell your guy friends while off fishing and getting drunk to impress them.
Try third person narrative and actually giving s
Try third person narrative and actually giving s
Do the characters grab you? The characters are pretty good but the first chapter is so short you don't get a chance to really like or hate anyone. It took me most of the chapter to even figure out what was going o