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Jingo44 Member Since November 25, 2011
Neighbor Girl
Jingo44 4325 days ago
- 0 + Paragraphs please. Sounded like a good story to start, but I found it impossible to read after a few lines.
Midnight Sex
Jingo44 4449 days ago
- 0 + It's a very good build up but you probably should have continued on a little bit more before stopping. I would be very interested to read more of this story.

p.s. don't put yourself down, unfortuanately there are too many readers who will do that for you