Grimm
Member Since October 19, 2009
Playing House with my Cousin
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FilthyDirtyOne
5379 days ago
Grimm
5449 days ago
FilthyDirtyOne
5379 days ago
Grimm
5449 days ago
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I enjoyed the story as a whole, but the last few paragraphs seemed rushed to me. It looked as if you were in a hurry to finish it. Plus, it also appears the girl traveled a little to fast. She went from being afraid from her parents knowing she had a vibr
Uncle Wayne Moves In
by
The_Purvv
The_Purvv
I truly loved the story but I could only give it a 4 because I did not like the ending. I would have given it a 4.9 if it was possible.
It was very well written. The pacing and development was excellent. The attention to detail was superb. Keep writing
It was very well written. The pacing and development was excellent. The attention to detail was superb. Keep writing