Gemini9
Member Since October 19, 2009
Raven's tale
by
Pharoah
4912 days ago
Gemini9
5383 days ago
Pharoah
4912 days ago
Gemini9
5383 days ago
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So far it is a good start, but you need to go much farther with your story. It is not more than an introduction just yet, and you really should run spell-check and look into your grammer. Also you need more detail; get into what your characters are thinki
My Sister, A Comic Book Babe: Part 2
by
thegreenscar3
thegreenscar3
Loved the story! Great stuff, keep it coming! Send pics to gbprinny3@gmail.com.
Warlocks capture
by
Jamie_James_1972
Jamie_James_1972
I think that is giving this sad excuse for a story far too much credit.